Hi Amanda, thanks for your reply. My question isn't something that I can present publicly. That's why I thought there might be email help.

Hi Amanda,

I've changed my mind about submitting this manuscript. I might try later in the year using another project.

Thanks anyway!

Ok, thanks again. Posted it & joined TierII, YAY:):)

Thanks, Amanda! I'm not used to these forums. How do I actually post my pitch for the slam? Am looking into TierII membership now . . .

Thanks, Amanda! This is a great community. I wish I'd known about it earlier! Looking forward to getting to know more writers here. :) Have a good day!

Thanks for the friend request Amanda...and the warm welcome. I joined the group...getting a feel for the place, polishing up the ms, will be submitting soon. Thanks again!

Hey Amanda,

Glad my comments could help! I enjoyed the first pages. The whole mystery setting intrigued me...although maybe more context (is this a masquerade party? why has she never seen his face? what is he doing there? etc.) would probably ground readers more. Definitely an engaging beginning. Good luck!

Amanda,

Thanks for your note. I would be interested in a crit swap when you're ready. We can email our email addresses using the inbox here. The basement is dry now.

Have a great week!

Don

Heya!

To Amanda

From Laura and YALitChat!!