To Amber

From Laura and YALitChat!

Thank you, Amber! So thoughtful of you to think of me!

<3

 

MZ

Aww thank you! :)

 

I wonder why it says I am a new member and I've lost all my friends (sniff, sniff). I've been a member for a while now.

 

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, HAPPY BIRTHDAY, HAPPY BIRTHDAY to you!

Hiya Amber!

From Laura and YALitChat!!

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Amber, I just your comment.  Thank you!  Sorry I missed this.  Guess I should check my page a bit more often :)

Thanks so much, Amber. What is the next step after I revise that? Back to you? Back to the comment wall? Get lost? Jamie

 

Amber,thank you for you comments, I reworked the beginning as well as my query and have submitted them back to the critique groups for some more support. I hope I am getting. :)

You are welcome *wink* I try to keep my deeds undercover, but you found me out.

got your message on the agent group, but wasn't exactly sure where to comment. the ghost thing comes in the first section, its a little bit of a build up and really, i like where it is. (if you want to read the first five pages its on that group). I've been messing around with that query and it's making me a little crazy. The story is plotty, IMO, and its hard to figure out how to express it without getting too wordy.

thanks for your comments!

anna

She went to Medical College of Georgia, and now she's doing her residency (OB-GYN). So if you have a baby anytime in the future, be on the lookout for a Dr. Williams! :D (It's so weird calling one's friends "Doctor")

Thanks will do you.

Thanks for our very friendly welcome.........i just saw it and it's been there since July. I'm still learning the site and love the groups. Thanks again, Angela

Thank you for the suggestions on my query. I'm gonna put them into effect right now. Should I repost to Agent Inbox afterwards?

Thanks for your help!

Thank you so much for the kind welcome, Amber!

Thank you for your kind words. I hope you are enjoying it.

So far your story is captivating. I'm on about page 70 or so. Have a few comments, but not many. At the end, I will address all your concerns if I am able.

They certainly did. I spent the morning rewriting and it's back up in the query kick around. Hopefully will hear good comments. If you ever wanna look at it again and tell me what u think, would be more than happy to hear! Thanks again.

Thank you for the welcome. :)

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