got your message on the agent group, but wasn't exactly sure where to comment. the ghost thing comes in the first section, its a little bit of a build up and really, i like where it is. (if you want to read the first five pages its on that group). I've been messing around with that query and it's making me a little crazy. The story is plotty, IMO, and its hard to figure out how to express it without getting too wordy.
She went to Medical College of Georgia, and now she's doing her residency (OB-GYN). So if you have a baby anytime in the future, be on the lookout for a Dr. Williams! :D (It's so weird calling one's friends "Doctor")
They certainly did. I spent the morning rewriting and it's back up in the query kick around. Hopefully will hear good comments. If you ever wanna look at it again and tell me what u think, would be more than happy to hear! Thanks again.
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