To Lucas

From Laura and YALitChat!

YAY! Like I said, You're rockin' the reqs!!

Thanks! And YOU TOO! Congrats on your multiple requests today! YAY!

Hey John! Just want to thank you for being online and so super active and helpful during Pitch Slam 2. it's members like you that make this community great.

An injustice has been rectified, lol.

Right!? All better now!! :)

Thanks and good luck with that agent!!

Yay for the positive comment from one agent! Good luck with the rest of them!!

Congrats on the positive feedback from pitch slam!

Good luck in pitch slam! 

Yes, I can see your point and I agree. Too bad I can't take back my little pitch and make changes. I will keep that in mind for next time though. I tend to hold back important information and give out stuff that doesn't really matter as much. I'm learning.

I thought your pitch was good. My only question would be about who the clones are or why they have been created. That may be part of the mystery though. I think it would add to the build up if you could include something about that.

Thank you, That's totally something I didn't catch when I wrote it. She was 14 when she was kidnapped and gone for four months. She's been homeschooled since and is now in grade 12. I'll have to clarify that in my pitch. Something like this...

Three years have passed since Emma was kidnapped. No one knows what happened to her or how she ended up back at home, safe and sound four months later. The gap in her memory...

Would that have helped?