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A Female Viewpoint
Several of my chapters are written from a female viewpoint, a young woman in her late teens. My daughter says I hit it pretty well, she likes those chapters as a break from the relentless male view of the main character.
I am hoping someone here, a woman, could read these chapters, or even just one, particularly the first, which sets her personality, and tell me if I am on or off here.
Thanks.
Chapter Twenty: Alelu Miami In Hiding
Chapter Twenty Three: Alelu Miami, Leather Pants
Chapter Twenty Nine: Alelu Miami On The Run
The last is the most recent chapter posted on line.
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