Poem

[Raven Lucrecia]

I was looking through some old papers and I found a poem I wrote last year. Its not that great but if yall could read it and give me some read back that'd be great:) I know i need to work on the grammer and puncuation and probably wording and all that jazz but yea here it is:)

Please and Thank You:)<3

Masochistic Heart

locked up, confined by my own doing

tears sting my eyes brought on by your betrayal

I cant get out of this box i put myself in.

despite my knowlege from past expirience

I went for it, somethign so far out of reach.

My massachistic heart fell,

new cuts become pronounced,

old scars still etched in.

My head,still full of painful memories,

held on for quite sometime.

But soon it lost to the battle of the heart.

I gave it my all forgot the lessons learned.

It didnt take long for you to shatter

my heart, my soul, my dreams come true.

So here I lay on floor, numb.

I want to get up, wipe my tears and past (our past) away.

But i cant, I still hurt adn the only thing keeping me from the blade

is the little voice that tells me i will get up and walk away

if only for one day night...i will be free

free of hate, free of hurt, free of longing

free of you.

until then ill wait locked in my box

ill wait for time to heal and maybe next time

ill remember the reasons for the etching on my masochistic heart.

[Raven Lucrecia]

Hi Sheri haha i actually did forget to put the title. Ill add it tonight<3 im at school right now haha:). i will definatly post it add check out your blog weekly:) thank you so much

[Sheri Larsen]

Nice, Raven. Did you mean to leave out a title? Just a thing of mine: love titles. I post weekly writing exercises on my blog every Monday morning: call them Scriptorobics. Today I just happened to challenge everyone with writing a poem. You should post this one. Here's my blog if you're interested: http://writersally.blogspot.com.