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Eliza Tilton replied to lindsey frydman's discussion TO SAVE MY LIFE - Lindsey Frydman in the group Query Kick-Around
"I'll add that the behind steel walls portion is unnecessary. I'd combine it with the second sentence. Aiden is the Artificial Intelligence and Robotics Lab’s greatest creation, but something went wrong—Aiden's thoughts…"
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Heather Strum replied to lindsey frydman's discussion TO SAVE MY LIFE - Lindsey Frydman in the group Query Kick-Around
"Hi Lindsey, Sounds like a fun read, with some interesting tangles! Here are a few comments: Aiden is the Artificial Intelligence and Robotics Lab’s [DON'T SUPPOSE YOU COULD SHORTEN THIS TO "AIDEN IS THE ROBOTICS' LAB'S…"
May 11
lindsey frydman replied to Heather Strum's discussion Realistic MG: THE BEACH-BUM INVENTOR in the group Query Kick-Around
"Hey! Here are some of my thoughts. I hope they help.   :) Twelve-year-old Jordie Hodgefeltner knows when the janitors have been extra-thorough. That’s because he spends every lunch period in the bathroom stalls, hiding out. No friends,…"
May 8
lindsey frydman replied to Amy Trueblood's discussion FIGHTING CHANCE - YA THRILLER in the group Query Kick-Around
"I really like your query and it sounds like an interesting story. Hopefully my comments will help you fine tune it!  Out of control. That's what everyone calls black belt Nica McDonald.  (Nice hook!) After almost killing a boy in her…"
May 6
Amy Trueblood replied to lindsey frydman's discussion TO SAVE MY LIFE - Lindsey Frydman in the group Query Kick-Around
"Hi Lindsey! This sounds very cool. I just have a few comments.   Aiden is the Artificial Intelligence and Robotics Lab’s greatest creation, (Great Hook) (hidden behind steel walls - this threw me off - not sure you need) . But something…"
May 6
lindsey frydman commented on AE Rought's group Query Kick-Around
"Hi! I'd like to schedule a query.  :) Thank you."
May 3
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Brian Carman replied to lindsey frydman's discussion Uncovered-- Lindsey Frydman in the group First Pages (Crit Group)
"Blurb Hmmm...I can't decide if your blurb gives too much info or not enough. It definitely gives it in the wrong place. I thought this was regular fiction at first, but the last line hints at paranormal or sci-fi. Yet, I wasn't given…"
Aug 30, 2012
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Aug 2, 2012

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