"I like the story premise, but your 500 words are split into three scenes. Do you really need the first and second bit? It's just backstory that should be integrated into the actual story. I decided to jump straight into the scene where she is…"
"Ha--smexy is kind of, like, fangirl lingo. But good to know it didn't translate totally.
I really struggle with physical characteristics, where to add them, how not to make them boring. I realize this, but again, hearing it from an…"
"very interesting. I suppose my ghost novel is behind the times then...sigh.
Oh well, I've always loved Vampires and that kind of stuff and always will. Remember Vampire Diaries came out in 1991 which was YEARS before even Buffy the Vampire…"
"Good job everyone! I came up short but really, I am stunned I got as far as i did. I wasn't really ready so it was a HUGE kick off for me and i have so much to work with now. I'm impressed with all your wordiness!"
"to be honest as of yesterday I was happily hanging up my nano hat, pleased I had gotten as far as I had. Then today inspiration struck and I spit out another 1550 words...no way to make it to 50k but meh, as long as the muse is hot…"
snippet: “He has a real sense of color. They probably reflect his emotions at the time.” She walked back and forth studying each section. “You see this?” She asked, pointing to a blood red design…"
“I was wondering when you’d make it over here,” she said. She turned a piece of chicken around in the pan, which made a sizzling sound.
“You know why I’m here?” I asked. This surprised me…"
snippet: “That crow is somebody. There’s a spirit inside.”
I had the hardest time following her thought process, but she could see the crow and Tonya. She knew more than I did. “There’s a spirit inside…"
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