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"I think you're absolutely right about the voice change. When I wrote the book, I had Emma as more of a hippie, sensible, sometimes needy young woman, if you will. Then when I reworked the chapter her voice changed too much, and that's why…"
"Okay, thank's to each of you again for the wonderful tips. I changed the textbook thing:
“Oh! They,” that usually meant the city counsel, “want me to put together all the reference books on Indiana history printed after 1956.…"
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