"I really am super excited to be able to add my query that worked. I received four requests for fulls, lost count of the requests for partials, won a ton of contests and earned an offer of representation via indirect submission as a result of The…"
"L. L. McKinney, HERITAGE BLADE: AWAKENING, YA urban fantasy.
Fifteen-year-old Slayer Jay Mitchell has been trained to kill vampires, to maim lycans, to annihilate rathors, howlings and faeries 46 different ways, one of which involves the use of a…"
"L. L. McKinney, COVETED, YA urban fantasy
Caleb Dunnelly spends his weekends searching the net for clues about his missing parents, until he's tricked into going out to a club one Friday night. Amidst the smoke and lasers, he spies a…"
"COVETED by L.L. McKinney
After his parents vanish, Caleb Dunnelly is left with nothing but questions, and a younger sister to look after. Focused on being a good big brother, he doesn’t have time to search for answers. But when a centuries…"
"Posted twice, to ask a question and final word count. Joined the game late, though.
End word count: 50,021
NaNo Name: Tangynt
Only teaser lol: Jay could feel the Bloods moving across the grass, invading his territory, drawing closer to his…"
"First thing is the use of the word "was". I counted over a dozen was-es on the first page alone. I suggest shifting around sentences to get rid of as many of those as possible in order to tighten the writing and strengthen the active voice…"
"I pretty much agree with everything everyone else said, except for the set up. I'm one of those old fashioned readers who actually likes a little set up before the bullets start to fly. I really liked the scene you paint inside the club, I can…"
Love your website, eerie (but cool) music! I also love your outlook that God will provide the means when it's time. I agree. Although I know God helps those who help themselves, I also know when it's right He'll find a way to lead us there.
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