Bell is running for her life. Two groups are searching for her. The lectchens want to kill her. The World fold want her blood to make a vacine. She doesn't like either option, she just wants to…"
"I thought the story was funny and sweet. However, if the king already wore boots, he would recognize shoes. I expected him to be barefoot.
The characters, Necktie and Earring are named for the items they promote. Shouldn't Sir Handy be…"
"Hi Kelly, thank you so much for your help! Between you and Laura you helped me whip it into shape. Now I just have to find someone to publish it. You are right Kelly, I tend to try to write everything like a short story, and…"
"Thank you so much for your input. I worked hard on this one trying to come up with body part names for the advisors, I'm so glad you liked it. Your changes as well as Kelly's make perfect sense, thanks again.
"Hi, Sherry. Sorry this took me so long. I've attached the file with my tracked changes. But just a few comments. This story idea is really cute. The only thing you really need to watch out for is using too much detail. It read more like a short…"
Sorry it's taken me so long. I've been sick all week w stomach flu and inner ear infection.
I really enjoyed your silly story and loved the ending. All the ways the king's advisors tried on the shoes I could picture in my…"
King Big Foot finds something strange near his throne. He calls to his three advisors to help him figure out what it is. Sir Handy, Sir Necktie, and Sir Earring all offer suggestions but it is King Big Foot who figures out what it is actually for. Love to hear what everyone thinksSee More
Sherry, I was just reading your revised query and realized you are from Maine. So am I. It's wonderful to find another Maine author here. I'd love to connect, if you're interested and/or interested in the private critique group I started with another Maine writer. Well, back to your query. ";-)
Hello Sherry! We have a group called Query Kick-Around for help with queries. Perhaps you should join that group and schedule your query to be reviewed there? I think that is the best option for you. Good luck!
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