This Austin publisher is opening to PB sumbmission from January 15th through 31st. They are accepting Fantasy & Science Fictions PBs only. It's an interesting submission call so I thought I'd pass it along:http://www.cbaybooks.com/resources/writers/pbsubs I know they are legitimate because one of their authors, P.J. Hoover, is a published Austin writer I've actually met and I've heard great things about the editor. Best of luck…See More
Thanks so much. Great suggestions. It's always so much easier for me to see a better order for other people's query letters than my own but I think you're right about switching mine up. I really…"
I second some of Susan’s confusion. I think the first paragraph would be more effective if it focused more on the conflict with Harmony (wasn’t clear to me that she was pregnant—also thought it was a drug reference). In…"
"Susan, thanks so much. Great feedback. I can see the ambiguity in the things you pointed out and I definitely like changing the order of the things she's coping with. That works much better. I appreciate it!"
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