"This reads much better to me and it definitely seems to be a curious story. I like the thought of a boy whose mere whisper is magical; that is unique.I would like to take a look at this. Please send your original pitch, your query, and…"
"This, I feel, is better. :) I'm still a little confused about Why Jake is so sure that he is not actually the one the sword is calling for, but rest of it sounds more in sync.
I would be willing to go ahead and take a look at…"
"This is curious to me, and sounds like it could be a good read.Please send the original pitch, your query, and the first three chapters of your manuscript (plus the prologue, if you have one) in a Word-compatible attachment to…"
"I enjoy reading epic fantasy, and you seem to have some interesting elements here, but this pitch felt all over the place. What is important here? Why does him becoming a mercenary, or even joining the Vashyre-hunters, become important…"
"I really like the sound of this, and I'm intrigued about reading more. :D It could be a type of fictional book that would get middle-graders more interested in early American History, and I would be curious to see how that was…"
"This definitely sounds interesting, and while I agree that the pitch itself seems a bit clunky, the idea behind the story is what really caught my attention. I would love to be able to read more of this.Please send your original pitch, your…"
"I'm very curious about this story, but just doesn't seem to be enough information in this pitch to have me request it at the moment. However, I would love to see this pitch revised and resubmitted with more information. You do…"
"Ok, I definitely want to read more of this one. :) There's plot, intrigue, King Arthur (have I mentioned before that I LOVE King Arthur?) And this twist with Merlin and machinery... I'm so very curious right now.…"
"I'm not much of a fan for Paranormal Romance... sorry. There are too many I've read that have similar plots, and most of them depend on a girl making choices about who she can trust and what she's supposed to believe... and…"
"I agree with Tamar here. You have me curious, though, with the fact that your MC knows that your rescuer is an alien. But what happens then? You've told me how your story begins, but what actually happens in the rest of your…"
"This is an excellent pitch, I must say! It's weird, out-of-the-box -- "uncomformed" with other ideas I've seen (if you'll excuse the liberty I took in using one word to make up another, of course. ;D) I…"
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