Thanks for asking about Georgia. After many migraines (I mean it) I had to recognize that there just was not much happening conflict-wise so I have set Georgia and her sisters and friends in a drawer. But I am 8 chapters into something that I like and am not letting myself go back and revise until I have a full draft. (Because I can agonize over the first hook and then never get anywhere).
Use what you can from the suggestions which may not even make sense. And send me some Arizona sunshine, please!!!