To Lori

From Laura and YALitChat!

To Lori

From Laura and YALitChat!!

Lori,

I'm still trying to get back to you via private message. It just won't send. I can't even compose a new message. I wrote an email to the admins and hope they can help. It must be a glitch in the matrix... ;-)

Lori,

for some reason I can't send you a private message. When I click the send button nothing happens, so I'll just leave an open comment.

I read the comment Georgia left on your story. I understand why she thought the angels were a little much, but I disagree with her. I mean, I loved the story of the two sisters already, before I read about the angels, but I just absolutely loved that the story got a paranormal/fantasty side to it.

I have one more suggestion to make, maybe mention the paranormal side in the beginning somewhere in your query. Maybe that way it wouldn't come as a surprise in the end.

Don't give up. This is such a frustrating business! And you seem to have worked in it for so long, you know exactly what I'm talking about.

Your help has been incredible. And believe me, everytime I saw your name on my query or first 5 I silently cursed you!!! BUt not because I was so upset with your help, but because I knew I had to polish it up some more. And I knew that it was true, and not just your opinion.

Thanks so much for all you've done! I know I will see one of your books in a store one day. I will buy it and send it to you for a signature.

You've been amazing. Keep up the fantastic work and don't get discouraged. It's so easy to lose confidence in ourselves when our hearts are on the table and everyone can poke them. No one will ever know what it feels like unless they've been there themselves.

Nat

hi lori!

thanks for the invite...

jessica