"All great feedback that I will begin incorporating ASAP. Thanks! (And I was debating about moving the second paragraph) Also, each paragraph seems too big to me-not enough white space. I am a visually aesthetic person and wonder if I should break it…"
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"Here are a few thoughts. Starting high school is perhaps one of the scariest times of a young girl's life. And not having your best friend to do it with is even scarier. I don't get this sense from her. Show me how she feels.
"Hi Jordan. Thanks for the input. It's funny because fairytales always make me thing of love...which is sort of an odd concept when referring to friendship, but for me friendship is love...or, at least it could be. So, anyway, you thoughts are…"
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