"To Lorettajo From Laura and YALitChat!!"

"To Lorettajo From Laura and YALitChat!"

"I feel every bit of tension, excitement and want to read more.....love Buffy's ideas. I am learning how to do this and will certainly be copying you!"

"Thanks everyone...first round of revisions are now posted....keep critiquing!"

"All great feedback that I will begin incorporating ASAP. Thanks! (And I was debating about moving the second paragraph) Also, each paragraph seems too big to me-not enough white space. I am a visually aesthetic person and wonder if I should break it…"

"I am removing my post now, now sure if this will go with it, but I wanted to thank everyone for their wonderful comments. I have started revising and keeping all these thoughts in my head!"

"Thanks so much everyone. This feedback will really help me get my manuscript in order. Everyone answered many of the lingering questions I'd had."

"My three weeks in the First Pages will be up in two weeks. I'd love to be put on the beta list. Thanks so much for all of this!"

"Here are a few thoughts. Starting high school is perhaps one of the scariest times of a young girl's life. And not having your best friend to do it with is even scarier. I don't get this sense from her. Show me how she feels. Also, I…"

"Hi Jordan. Thanks for the input. It's funny because fairytales always make me thing of love...which is sort of an odd concept when referring to friendship, but for me friendship is love...or, at least it could be. So, anyway, you thoughts are…"