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Things to Watch Out for While Editing
Started Feb 22, 2010 0 Replies 0 Likes
Hi everyone! I recently finished my third revision on my YA fantasy novel. While editing, I discovered a plethora of things I needed to watch out for when editing, like passive verbs, lengthy…Continue
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Lilly Maiden replied to Robin Lucas's discussion The amazing Nathan Bransford has left the building..."That's definitely saddening. His blog was one of the best resources about the publishing industry for any writer. I wish him the best of luck at his new job! It looks like he's going to have an exciting time. ^_^"
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Lilly Maiden replied to Lilly Maiden's discussion Author Interviews in the group Blogger Nation"5th Author Interview:
YA Suspense, Romance, Thriller Author Caroline B. Cooney
I was super lucky to get the chance to interview superstar author Caroline B. Cooney. Many know her series The Face on the MIlk Carton, and her award winning Goddess of…"
Melissa Killian replied to Lilly Maiden's discussion Jade Wind by Lilly in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"I agree that you should put your main character, Jade, in the opening paragraph. You can always add in the backstory about the king when she gets her memories back. Also, the synopsis ends abruptly. What happens? Does Jade dethrone the imposter…"
StaffC. Lee McKenzie replied to Lilly Maiden's discussion Jade Wind by Lilly in the group Synopsis Repair Shop
"From your synopsis I get the idea that this will be an exciting adventure with romance and danger and magic--a great combination to put zing into a story. Your MC comes off as a strong willed girl, and teens will identify with and root for her. I…"
Lilly Maiden replied to Lilly Maiden's discussion Author Interviews in the group Blogger Nation"4th Author Interview:
YA Science Fiction Author LM Preston
This time, the featured author interview is with our very own LM Preston. She's the coordinator for the Synopsis Workshop, and is known for offering super helpful comments and…"
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Problematic scene? Scene just not shaping up the way you want it to? Fight scene not as kick-ass as it should be? How 'bout that kissing scene? Lost its sizzle? Let us pimp your scene! Three page maximum please! Group Coordinator: LM Preston
StaffLM Preston replied to Lilly Maiden's discussion Jade Wind by Lilly in the group Synopsis Repair Shop
"Hi Jade.
I really liked this. It seemed to have a lot of action, the only thing is I had to read through the first 3 paragraphs to get to it. I think if you combined the backstory of the first 3 paragraphs, and worked on a hook for each following…"
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Hi everyone! I really hate synopsis writing, but I want to get published more than I hate it so I took a jab. Please let me know what I can do to make it better. There's no need to pad your comments. I take hits like a cockaroach. ^_^
Lilly Maiden joined Georgia McBride's groupSynopsis Repair Shop
Synopsis in serious need of repair? Wondering what goes here or there? Short synopsis repair is here. 1-2 pages, we don't care. Any longer though, you must look elsewhere. Group Coordinator is LM Prestion.See More
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I recently conducted an interview with Kate McMullan, creator of children's books like I'm Bad! and I Stink!, chapter books for young readers like the…"
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15 Obvious & Not So Obvious Query Mistakes to Avoid
Posted on March 21, 2010 at 9:00pm 0 Comments 0 Likes
I sat down today and compiled a list of 15 obvious and 15 not so obvious query mistakes to watch out for in the hopes that it will help others with their query writing efforts. ^_^ I am copying this down from my blog. Please visit and comment if you feel so inclined. :-D
Original Blog Post: Obvious Query Mistakes,… Continue
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Things to Watch Out for While Editing
Posted on March 9, 2010 at 10:24pm 0 Comments 0 Likes
Hi everyone! I recently finished my third revision on my YA fantasy novel. While editing, I discovered a plethora of things I needed to watch out for when editing, like passive verbs, lengthy descriptions, and repetition.
I wanted to share it with everyone because I know we all struggle when it comes to killing our darlings.
1) UNESSECARY SCENES: Yes, you know what I mean. Those scenes that were so fun to write, and so cute in your mind, but do absolutely nothing to…
Continue Interview with YA Fantasy Author Dia Calhoun
Posted on March 3, 2010 at 6:03pm 0 Comments 0 Likes
I was fortunate enough to get the chance interview Ms. Dia Calhoun, author of young adult fantasy novels like Aria of the Sea, Avielle, and The Phoenix Dance. Her books have been honored with numerous ALA Best Book for Young Adult awards. Despite her busy schedule as a full time writer (she’s also an amazing letter artist!), Ms. Calhoun was kind enough to take time to answer a few questions about how she writes and offer advice for other…
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- At 11:46am on April 12, 2010,
StaffC. Lee McKenzie said… - Thanks for coming on board the Experts. Loved seeing your name pop up on the "joined" list.
- At 9:07am on April 7, 2010,
StaffSheri Larsen said… - Hi Lilly, just emailed off your interview questions. Want to make sure you receive them. ";-) Looking forward to it.
Sher~
- At 11:15am on April 1, 2010,
StaffC. Lee McKenzie said… - Hi again, Lily. Why don;t you email me your synopsis directly. I have to leave town for a few days and my lap top is down, but I could print it out, read it and see if I can give you some suggestions by next week. Also tell me if this will be a light, humorous piece or a bit more darkly serious. I think that's a key to my understanding of how to be of help.
If that works for you, use this email: cleemckenziebooks AT comcast DOT net.
I really did think your plot was a super quest story. Also see you had a request for a partial. Congrats. Was it this story?
- At 10:41pm on March 29, 2010,
StaffSheri Larsen said… - Lily, I'd love to read your interview with LM, but I'm doing one with her in a few weeks and I wouldn't want to conflict. I'm sure it's awesome. ";-)
- At 11:23am on March 23, 2010,
StaffSheri Larsen said… - Lily, congrats on your partial!! That's awesome!!
- At 4:02pm on February 26, 2010,
Megan Curd said… - Hi Lilly! Welcome to YALitChat. Glad you joined! Please visit the Welcome New Members post in the forum and the FAQS and Rules. Enjoy!
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