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Andrea Leech replied to Levi Buchanan's discussion VINE by Levi Buchanan in the group First Pages (Crit Group)
Levi Buchanan replied to Levi Buchanan's discussion "Vine" by Levi Buchanan in the group First Pages (Crit Group)
Levi Buchanan joined Georgia McBride's groupAlso posted over at my personal blog:
"One thing I’ve really found while editing is that I was super-indulgent in the first half of my manuscript — particularly the first ten chapters. Wow, did I ever over-write. However, though I’ve been stripping sentences out whole, the excess text has been helpful. As I edit descriptive grafs down into two-three sentences or fusing the details into a line of dialog, it’s helpful just to have the info right there.
Things are still going well with editing, but here’s another confession: I thought editing would be a breeze compared to writing the first draft. False. There is an artistry to editing that I have great appreciation for now. I’m not saying I’m an artist while doing this. Far from it. But if I ever do have an editor work on a book for me one day, I’ll be both quick and sincere with my thanks."
Here are your first Five with the corrections and an analysis at the end. I really enjoyed it, and I hope I get to read more to see what happens!

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