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"Indy is a little old to just be entering a tennis academy of this level and it puts her behind the eight- ball right away (and thus ups the tension in the story). It's always been her dream, but her game developed a little later (most female…"
Like the changes you made to her new coach and the love interests, but at the end you call it a novel about three young women fighting for the same dream. Yet, there's romance. Which is more important?
Just thought of…"
"Love that sentence you're not sure about! It has punch and gives us crucial information. I'd love to see more of that in your beginning paragraphs.
Indiana Gaffney, eighteen-year-old tennis pro hopeful has to win the OBX…"
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