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Jamila Mosi
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Kym Balthazar Fetsko replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"Hi Jamila ~
Here were my thoughts. I did them w/out reading the comments previous, so I apologize if these points have already been addressed. I am certainly no expert in synopsis writing, so please take what you want and discard…"
Anne Severn Williamson replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"Hi Jamila!
I always love your stories and the names of your characters. This tale has the passion and sweep of The Three Musketeers, only with magic! Here are a few points that I have learned about synopsis writing. I really hope they help you.…"
StaffLaura Chesterson replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby in the group Synopsis Repair Shop
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Seventeen-year-old TRINKET BLAK is starting her third year at the prestigious Epstein Academy when she receives the news of her mother’s death.
Trinket had been taken to Earth so she could one day come back and fulfill the…"
Jamila Mosi replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"Thanks C. Lee, i re did the synopsis to fix a some of the questions you posed, in the response just above yours.
Lol, her mother dies, but her biological mother takes her to meet her family that is in Lejour De Renissance. Also I will add in…"
StaffC. Lee McKenzie replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby in the group Synopsis Repair Shop
"I'LL MAKE THE SAME DISCLAIMER AS STEPHANIE. I'M NOT THE BEST AT WRITING SYNOPSES, BUT I'M FAIRLY GOOD AT GRAMMAR AND LOGIC--SOMETIMES. SO TAKE WHAT HELPS AND SKIP THE REST.
THIS IS QUITE A TALE OF FANTASY-ADVENTURE. I THINK YOU…"
Jamila Mosi replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"Here's my revision....
Seventeen-year-old TRINKET BLAK is starting her third year at the prestigious Epstein Academy when she receives the news of her mother’s death. The world she thought she knew turns into an assortment of…"
Jamila Mosi replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"Thanks Stephanie, =)
I didn't put how her mother unlocked her powers because it would have made the synopsis over two pages, and I didnt think the sequence would add or take away from the synopsis. But IDK now.
The Chalice is a Diamond Chalice,…"
Stephanie Wardrop replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"All comments should be read with the understanding that I SUCK at synopses! I'll start with style stuff and then get to grammar/syntax below.
I think you could condense a lot of this, but I am not sure that's crucial for a synopsis,…"
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The Darkest Lullaby
Hopefully this is decent because tomorrow I am sending this in to an agency. LOl But it is two pages I swear it =) Tell me how i did... Seventeen-year-old TRINKET BLAK is starting her third year at the prestigious Epstein Academy when she receives the news of her mother’s death. The world she thought she knew turns into an assortment of secrets her mother kept from her and the realization that she has no one else. On the day of her mother’s funeral, a stranger approaches Trinket introducing…See More
Stephanie Wardrop replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion What Would Jen Do? First Draft. in the group Query Kick-Around"Very interesting premise so I would keep going with it (especially since you can buy some WWJD bracelets to give away at book signings and say the "J" is for Jenn Aniston). Some nitpicky grammar stuff:
Not in some crazy…"
Jamila Mosi replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion What Would Jen Do? First Draft. in the group Query Kick-Around"Thanks Patricia =]
Yeah typo, but I'd apelled it right in my story I guess I accidentlt deleted the N. Ill fix it.
My character is really sarcastic so I was trying to put that in my query to. But j can do it a different way if it doesn't…"
Jamila Mosi replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby TAKe 25 TRILLION =) in the group Query Kick-Around"I like it tooo =)
Than you Andrea =) and you too Lori =) its always a pleasure. "
Mari J Carpenter replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby TAKe 25 TRILLION =) in the group Query Kick-Around"I like it!! I like it alot!"
Jamila Mosi replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby TAKe 25 TRILLION =) in the group Query Kick-Around"How about this?
Seventeen-year-old Trinket Blak watches as her reality unravels into a long string of deceit. Learning from a stranger the mom she buried wasn’t her biological mother didn’t begin to scratch the surface.…"
Jamila Mosi replied to Jamila Mosi's discussion The Darkest Lullaby TAKe 25 TRILLION =) in the group Query Kick-Around"@ Mari thanks for your suggestions...im revising now =)
@Andrea I agree the first sentence is really long. And yeah they do. Ha, I tried to changed them but other ways didn't sound right, actually might take out a sentence. I…"
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- Contemporary, Paranormal, Chick-Lit, Romance, Urban Fantasy
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Kindle 3 or Nook 2?
Posted on July 29, 2010 at 3:42am 0 Comments 0 Likes
So my birthday is September 2nd, and I'm going to San Fran for vacation before school, and when I do I must inform my brother of what I want for my birthday.
I want an ereader. Because my book shelf is almost to its maximum!! So I'm only buying the sequels to series I currently own, to prevent need of another bookshelf--which is the same price as an ereader.
I wanted a ipad at first but...i have an itouch and a blackberry. Don't see the use,…
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- At 12:56am on September 2, 2012,
StaffLaura Chesterson said… To Jamila
From Laura and YALitChat!
- At 2:18am on September 2, 2011,
StaffLaura Chesterson said… To Jamila
From Laura and YALitChat!!
- At 10:22am on September 1, 2011,
StaffGeorgia McBride said… - Happy birthday!!!!!!!!
- At 9:43am on September 1, 2011,
J.L. Spelbring said… - Happy Birthday
- At 7:23pm on March 7, 2011,
Cindy L. Rodriguez said… - Hi and thanks for adding me as a friend. I look forward to chatting with you.
- At 11:56am on January 2, 2011,
Shreyonti Chakraborty said… - Hi Jamila! I was wondering if you could help me with your latest book. I am a little hard pressed on time to work on it now, but if somebody gave me their opinion, it would makt things easier. I have sent you an e-mail with an attachment. If you have time, could you please go through it.
- At 2:25pm on September 2, 2010,
StaffGeorgia McBride said… - happy birthday
- At 3:33pm on May 30, 2010,
TJCarson said… - YUSS! I hope the challenge helps you!!! It works like a bEAST for me!
- At 5:04pm on May 14, 2010, TJCarson said…
- Nice! ha. and GREAT BACKGROUND! I'm on the 3rd page of yours, making comments as I go :) I'm liking it!
- At 4:31pm on May 14, 2010, TJCarson said…
- Ha. Go to your home page on this site and then there should be a thing at the top for getting started and it says customize!!! That should make your page SNAZ-TASTICC! haha
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