I'll take a look and maybe you'll do the same for me for my 1-866...
I'm putting my comments in CAPS, but I'm not shouting, just trying to make them stand out for you.
Seventeen-year-old Quinn hasn’t slept in…"
"Thank you, LM Preston. Total lightbulb moment when you said I need to focus on Quinn's POV. Duh! Why didn't I see that myself? That's why fresh eyes are so important. Thank you for taking the time to give me feedback. It's been…"
"Hey Heather, here's my comments. Overall to tighten up stay on the mc's POV. Also, slim down on the names if you can. From reading the story sounds exciting but try to write it like a short story of the full story focus on the main…"
Thanks for the feedback. I've been sleep deprived, but not to the extent of my MC. :) Synopsis is definitely my weakness. I can't tell you how many drafts I've done on this. Thanks again for your comments.
I started reading your synopsis and right away I noticed your main character was not in bold and in not in caps. In a synopsis that's what you need. Also every paragraph needs a hook. How would you feel if you didn't…"
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"Hi, everyone. I'm so happy to be here. I'm Heather Reid. I write paranormal romance/horror/and fantasy. I'm an American expat living in Scotland with my Scottish hubby. I eat mayonnaise on my fries, love men in kilts, and…"
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