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Elizabeth Arroyo replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion IMPERIUM YA sci-fi in the group First Pages (Crit Group)
"I would read on. I love the way you set up their relationship and the worldbuilding. I'm not too keen on reading sci fi because I tend to forget all the technical names. There's quite a few thrown out in these first pages. Not sure if that…"
Apr 15
Dina von Lowenkraft replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion IMPERIUM YA sci-fi in the group First Pages (Crit Group)
"Hi Kim, Thank you for your feedback - and at a writer's conference this weekend an agent made a similar comment about the lack of forward motion. Will go back and re-think how to do this scene/alter it... I like the highlighting idea - thank…"
Apr 4
Kim Trotter replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion IMPERIUM YA sci-fi in the group First Pages (Crit Group)
"Hi Dina: I remember reading your query letter and this is an interesting premise. I feel like I get a good sense of your main character and even a little of Xander -- enough for the time being, at least. And Im interested in finding out more about…"
Mar 29
Dina von Lowenkraft replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion IMPERIUM YA sci-fi in the group First Pages (Crit Group)
"Hi Sandra, Thank you so much for having taken the time to read my first pages and giving me feedback! I'd love to share more, but am new to this site and don't know if there is a place to do so... cheers, Dina"
Mar 24
Sandra S. Rice replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion IMPERIUM YA sci-fi in the group First Pages (Crit Group)
"Hi Dina: Wow. You get us right in on the action of the story. You create interest from the first. I really was hooked from the start and can't wait to read on. (!) All the elements for a successful plot are here, and you do a good job of…"
Mar 22
Dina von Lowenkraft replied to Gareth Craig Mottram's discussion Jason Willow - Y/A Paranormal Action in the group Query Kick-Around
"Hi Gareth, I think your letter is clear, but too long. I also know that it is hard to sell an already self-published book to an agent/publisher, unless of course you are EL James or Amanda Hocking (after a million sales)... but all it takes is one…"
Mar 21
Dina von Lowenkraft replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion QUERY Imperium YA Sci-Fi in the group Query Kick-Around
"Hi Patricia! Good question. In my cyborg world, they are 'born' - half test tube human, half bionic implants. There are AI units, that are deemed lees than cyborg (as are humans), and the AI units are created, not born... so I'd still…"
Mar 21
Dina von Lowenkraft replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion QUERY Imperium YA Sci-Fi in the group Query Kick-Around
"Thank you Gareth for all your notes/thoughts! I say Black and White because those are the distinctions in the cyborg world (where everything is black and white - skin color makes no difference here, only hair color does, but both are equal and they…"
Mar 21
Patricia Blount replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion QUERY Imperium YA Sci-Fi in the group Query Kick-Around
"Hi, Dina, Wow, great concept! I have some questions... first, Xor is currently a cyborg and later wakes human? If yes, this is "born" the right word for your opening sentence? Perhaps "Created to become Imperium ruler..."…"
Mar 20
Gareth Craig Mottram replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion QUERY Imperium YA Sci-Fi in the group Query Kick-Around
"Hi Dina I like the sound of this.  I've read over the other comments so not much to add but here goes... Dear Ms (Agent last name),  I am querying you in the hope that you will be interested in my YA manuscript entitled IMPERIUM, a…"
Mar 20
Dina von Lowenkraft replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion QUERY Imperium YA Sci-Fi in the group Query Kick-Around
"This is great, Ashley! Thank you!! Will go on the blog you mentioned now - thanks for sharing ;-) Dina"
Mar 19
Dina von Lowenkraft replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion QUERY Imperium YA Sci-Fi in the group Query Kick-Around
"thanks for looking into this for us all! Much appreciated information. cheers, Dina"
Mar 19
Ashley Walker replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion QUERY Imperium YA Sci-Fi in the group Query Kick-Around
"Hi Dina, I'm hooked. This novel sounds terrific. And I'll certainly look out for your debut. Below I've left some comments. I hope they're helpful. Dear Ms (Agent last name), I am querying you in the hope that you will be…"
Mar 19
Bonnie Ferrante replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion QUERY Imperium YA Sci-Fi in the group Query Kick-Around
"I've rechecked the books, such as You Can Write Children's Books, and sites, such as Women on Writing, that I use and they say to put the title in italics. I researched a little deeper and did find a couple that put the title in caps but…"
Mar 19
Dina von Lowenkraft replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion QUERY Imperium YA Sci-Fi in the group Query Kick-Around
"Hi Kim, Thank you for your enthusiasm - I really appreciate it! I sometimes wonder about putting the Sleeping Beauty meets Avatar part because it is so different... but there are enough references that a fairy tale lover would enjoy it (the…"
Mar 19
Kim Trotter replied to Dina von Lowenkraft's discussion QUERY Imperium YA Sci-Fi in the group Query Kick-Around
"First off, wow. I want to read this book and I'm not even really into retellings of classic fairytales -- so wow. I really don't have much to add. I see what Caryn says about the telling instead of showing, but as far as a query letter…"
Mar 18

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At 1:34am on July 20, 2012,
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At 3:37pm on November 11, 2010, Catherine Stine said…
Thanks, Dina, you too.
At 9:05am on November 11, 2010, Catherine Stine said…
How's it going, Dina? I'm up to date with my word count, but it's a real challenge!!!
At 3:13pm on November 4, 2010, Catherine Stine said…
Hi Dina
I've gotten 6,000+ words so far. I'm happy with that, but worried about how it'll be say, by next week, when my outline gets a bit vague, and I'll have to rely on powering forward without it!
Keep the faith, and carry on!
At 8:53am on October 31, 2010, Catherine Stine said…
I'm excited to try NaNo but am nervous about it because I figure if I eliminate days like Thanksgiving, I'll need to write about 6 to 7 pages a day. It's a good challenge though!
At 10:49am on October 29, 2010, Catherine Stine said…
I officially signed on today for NaNo!
At 3:37pm on October 26, 2010, Charlotte Omillin said…
Hi Dina, hope all is well!
At 2:18pm on October 26, 2010, Catherine Stine said…
That sounds more and more appealing. I'll let you know. Outlining the new idea in my head!!!
At 9:10am on October 26, 2010, Darby Karchut said…
Hi Dina. Glad to make friends - this is a fun and upbeat place to hang out!

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