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Would you read ? [REVISED.]
Started this discussion. Last reply by Cortne Bonilla Feb 10, 2010. 5 Replies 0 Likes
“He who does not understand your silence, will probably not understand your words.”Livvy Porter has been silent for years. No one understands her because they wont take the time to figure out why…Continue
Good Feedback?
Started this discussion. Last reply by Georgia McBride Feb 8, 2010. 4 Replies 0 Likes
I write stories, not surprisingly. I would love feedback on some of my work. Not just, that was good., But feedback thatll help me progress as a writer and in the story. Anyone wanna take a look?…Continue
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StaffJessie Harrell replied to Cortne Bonilla's discussion Hush. in the group First Pages (Crit Group)
"wow - I have to agree on that last line being a total surprise! Love it! As I read it again, I can see some of the clues... front and back of the classroom, middle of a lesson, but it hits you out of the blue the first time.
I'm confused about…"
Cortne Bonilla replied to Cortne Bonilla's discussion Would you read ? [REVISED.]"haha no i dont take offense, thats probably why i cant write one of these. I have only written a chapter. haha. I guess i need to actually write the whole thing because I dont know what the rest is even about yet."
Jessica Milar replied to Cortne Bonilla's discussion Would you read ? [REVISED.]"This is the part I loved about your revision; At Old Holly Oaks High, Livvy walks through the halls in a blur.
To help you along, it's going to take looking at many blurbs. Here's a few to help you out:
The Secret Year:
Colt and Julia…"
Cortne Bonilla replied to Cortne Bonilla's discussion Outloud. YA Romance/Drama novel. Author Cortne Bonilla . in the group First Pages (Crit Group)"im sorry im uploading a pdf."
Cortne Bonilla replied to Cortne Bonilla's discussion Would you read ? [REVISED.]"Hi. :]
thanks for helping. i tried making it a little longer, and went off the back of a book as an example."
Jessica Milar replied to Cortne Bonilla's discussion Would you read ?"HI Cortne,
Your first sentence has a typo, and that's easily fixed.
So you may want to reword "No one understand Livvy, but how could they?" try "No one understands Livvy, but how could they?"
Try to get into the habit of…"
StaffLM Preston replied to Cortne Bonilla's discussion Would you read ?
"I generally like more meat on my back covers. It sounds a bit disjointed - like you are leaving someting out. I think it needs more."
Cortne Bonilla posted a discussionWould you read ?
“He who does not understand your silence, will probably not understand your words.”Livvy Porter has been silent for years. No one understands her because they wont take the time to figure out why she's been quiet for so long. At Old Holly Oaks High, Livvy walks through the halls in a blur, biting her lips. That is, until a new person arrives at the school determined to open her up and find her lost voice. Livvy learns to love herself, love someone else and speak up for the first time in her…See More
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Writing gives me headaches.
Posted on February 5, 2010 at 7:54pm 0 Comments 0 Likes
But its the good kind of headaches. I really just want to be heard. I want people to see me as someone they can compare to. I love writing in the teen genre, probably, because I am a teen. But also because I believe love in the teenage years is the purest love you can find. It is based simply off the fact that, i like you, you like me. Money, car, kids and marriage, arent an issue. It's all about the feelings. And though it may…
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- At 12:26pm on March 28, 2013,
StaffLaura Chesterson said… To Cortne
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- At 12:13am on March 28, 2011,
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- At 5:58pm on March 28, 2010,
Candace Ganger said… - Happy Birthday!
- At 9:55am on March 28, 2010,
StaffRoza marie said… - Happy Birthday
- At 9:30am on March 28, 2010,
StaffGeorgia McBride said… - happy birthday
- At 12:45pm on March 27, 2010,
J.L. Spelbring said… - Happy Birthday
- At 10:42am on February 21, 2010,
Evonne Marie Biggins said… - Hey Cortne, I'm glad you're my friend!
Evonne.
- At 12:19am on February 10, 2010,
Megan Curd said… - Hi Cortne! Welcome to YALitChat. Glad you joined! Please visit the Welcome New Members post in the forum and the FAQS and Rules. After that, why not check out some of our great groups? Enjoy!
- At 12:30am on February 6, 2010,
Angela Corbett said… - Hi Cortne! It's nice to meet you!
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