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Brynna Gabrielson replied to Bonnie Ferrante's discussion Tag and Like Party in the group eBooks and Self-Publishing"I'm interested.
You can find Starkissed here! Send me you details and I'll get in there!
http://www.amazon.com/Starkissed-ebook/dp/B008XGUI4G/ref=sr_1_5?ie=UTF8&qid=1345063246&sr=8-5&keywords=starkissed"
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StaffLM Preston replied to Brynna Gabrielson's discussion Starkissed first 250. in the group Pimp My Scene
"I did giggle at that first line. The rest was interesting but didn't make me laugh."
Amber Skye Forbes replied to Brynna Gabrielson's discussion Starkissed first 250. in the group Pimp My Scene"The first 250 is evil. I'm hoping you can manage it, though. No. In fact, I KNOW you can.
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Brynna Gabrielson replied to Brynna Gabrielson's discussion Starkissed first 250. in the group Pimp My Scene"Haha. I know what you mean Amber. I was really unsure of this scene a long time ago when it was in an earlier draft, so I took it out. Just thought I'd see what people thought. I have actually been retooling the other scene, but am on vacation…"
Amber Skye Forbes replied to Brynna Gabrielson's discussion Starkissed first 250. in the group Pimp My Scene"I honestly feel like that you've tried so hard to have humor that when I read it, the humor seems forced. I know Georgia said to add some humor to the beginning, but I'm sort of wondering if you can add humor to the first 250 you already…"
StaffLaura Chesterson replied to Brynna Gabrielson's discussion Starkissed first 250. in the group Pimp My Scene
"Hi Brynna!
I'm new to the group. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to comment on your scene.
**Please remember that any suggestions are meant to be helpful. Use what you like and disregard the rest.**
“So giving birth is apparently…"
Brynna Gabrielson added a discussion to the group Pimp My Scene
Starkissed first 250.
Apparently my first 250 aren't quite funny....so I was hoping you all could take a look at this and tell me if if makes you laugh. It's from an alternate opening of days ago but wasn't sure the first line was exactly appropriate...lol. “So giving birth is apparently like having a chain saw shoved up your vagina,” Caroline casually announces. I drop the fork full of rubbery meat and slimy lettuce I was about to put in my mouth and gape at her. “I’m sorry, what?” “You know my mom’s friend Sherry…See More
Brynna Gabrielson joined Georgia McBride's groupPimp My Scene
Problematic scene? Scene just not shaping up the way you want it to? Fight scene not as kick-ass as it should be? How 'bout that kissing scene? Lost its sizzle? Let us pimp your scene! Three page maximum please! Group Coordinator: LM Preston
Brynna Gabrielson replied to Brynna Gabrielson's discussion Starkissed Revised once more. in the group Query Kick-Around"I've only made a few changes, and for some reason the add discussion thing is hating on me. So I'll just post my revisions here. Please lemme know what you guys think!
Dear Agent,
Every teenage girl in the world dream of Grant West, teen…"
Mari J Carpenter replied to Brynna Gabrielson's discussion Starkissed Revised once more. in the group Query Kick-Around"Brynna,
I remeber reading your previous posts. The other posts suggestions I agree with. Why does Sdney not know about Grant if he's so famous? Maybe start with :Friday night sentence? You get he's a star when reporter's show up at…"
Brynna Gabrielson commented on Georgia McBride's group Craft Masters"I have a hard time writing in anything but present tense! Not sure why, but I've always favored it. Seems like I'm one of few..."
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- Contemporary, Paranormal, Chick-Lit, Romance, Urban Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Other
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- At 1:01am on September 3, 2012,
StaffLaura Chesterson said… To Brynna
From Laura and YALitChat!
- At 12:25am on September 3, 2011,
StaffLaura Chesterson said… To Brynna
From Laura and YALitChat!!
- At 12:07pm on January 5, 2011,
Samantha Rill said… - I totally meant good. With a 'D'. Not goo. Haha.
- At 12:07pm on January 5, 2011, Samantha Rill said…
- Hope the querying process is working out. Sometimes obsessing can be a good thing. Goo luck!
- At 9:44am on September 23, 2010, Amber Skye Forbes said…
- I've responded to your letter, so make sure you check that out. Better this time.
- At 8:53pm on September 12, 2010, Amber Skye Forbes said…
- I hope my comments helped you.
- At 10:07pm on August 19, 2010, Amber Skye Forbes said…
- Welcome to YALITCHAT! Please take a moment to visit our New Member welcome center by clicking here (http://yalitchat.ning.com/page/new-members). If you have any questions, please let me know. Thanks-Amber
- At 1:49pm on August 19, 2010,
StaffSheri Larsen said… - Hi Brynna,
Welcome to YAlitchat!! So happy you've found us. I see you've joined some of our groups. Great! Looking forward to working with you.
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