I've been crazy deep in revisions, so I haven't had the time to host another blogfest. But I'm feeling the withdrawls -- I want to do another soon! In the meantime, check out Andrew's upcoming blogfest page: he does a…"
"The biggest change for me was when I started participating in blogfests. If you're not familiar with this concept, one writer hosts a writing “fest”, where participants all submit links to their own blogs, sharing their material…"
"Okay I'll dive right in. I prefer the shorter version, but you should still fix the following.
The 'What he does know is ' throws me. You may want to rework that sentence. Your opening sentence on both is too long. That 'But the…"
"The concept of your story seems intriguing. I believe this query would be better if it wasn't filled with so many questions. It makes the reader question what the story is really about. Turn the questions into statements and it will read much…"
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Welcome Bryan! If you're ready to dive in, I invite you to check out the first pages group. We've got lots of first pages up just waiting for feedback from members like you. Hope to see you there. ~ Jessie
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