Thank you for allowing me the opportunity of reading your scenes.
I like starting a book with a chase scene – or in this case, a racing scene. It certainly wasn’t boring. I was impressed with your prose, which was very good.…"
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Girard / Wayward / 1
I laid on the throttle and smiled at an answering purr from the engine. My baby was a…"
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