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Alexis Wynn replied to Alexis Wynn's discussion Synopsis for THE GENETICIST’S DAUGHTER in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"WOW!! You guys are absolutely amazing and I feel lucky to have a group of people like you to help me look at my work from different angles. Thank you all for the help! Now back to revising. "
StaffC. Lee McKenzie replied to Alexis Wynn's discussion Synopsis for THE GENETICIST’S DAUGHTER in the group Synopsis Repair Shop
"INTERESTING CAST AND PLOT. I JUST THINK YOU NEED TO MAKE A FEW THINGS CLEARER. HOPE MY COMMENTS HELP YOU DO THAT.
LEE
Seventeen-year-old Sonia Jacobs’ father was the geneticist who discovered an extraterrestrial gene [THIS NEEDS TO BE…"
StaffLaura Chesterson replied to Alexis Wynn's discussion Synopsis for THE GENETICIST’S DAUGHTER in the group Synopsis Repair Shop
"Hi Alexis!
Most of this made sense to me and was easy to follow. Watch repeated words (like "finds" and "discovers") and words that seem too old-fashioned for YA (and your characters).
Repeated words are…"
s.d. Lishan replied to Alexis Wynn's discussion Synopsis for THE GENETICIST’S DAUGHTER in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"HI, Alexis,
Sarah and LM have taken a lot of time to give you some excellent advice at both the micro and macro levels. Like Stephanie, I'm going to wait until you revise this before I respond. I look forward to more completely hooked…"
Stephanie Wardrop replied to Alexis Wynn's discussion Synopsis for THE GENETICIST’S DAUGHTER in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"Alexis -- you have some great advice here which I owuld only echo, so I'm going to wait for a revision to comment. This sounds like a real thriller of a story!"
StaffLM Preston replied to Alexis Wynn's discussion Synopsis for THE GENETICIST’S DAUGHTER in the group Synopsis Repair Shop
"Hello Alexis! I'm happy to help: Overall you want your synopsis to read a bit like a short story of the book and there can be a little voice in it to make it flow better. It should hook the reader in from the beginning and suck them end until…"
Sarah Negovetich replied to Alexis Wynn's discussion Synopsis for THE GENETICIST’S DAUGHTER in the group Synopsis Repair Shop"Alexis,
I've left some notes in the text. Good luck with the submission box!
Seventeen-year-old Sonia Jacobs’ father was the geneticist who discovered an extraterrestrial [after reading this, I was confused by extraterrestrial. This…"
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Jamie Burch left a comment for Alexis Wynn"Thank you SO much for your feedback, Alexis! I really appreciate your help. :)
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Alexis Wynn replied to Alexis Wynn's discussion Natural Selection by Alexis Wynn in the group First Pages (Crit Group)"Hi Bonnie,
Thank you so much for the feedback. You ask questions I didn't even think of. This is really helpful!
Best,
Alexis"
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Alexis Wynn replied to Georgia McBride's discussion Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber"NATURAL SELECTION by Alexis Wynn
After recovering from the disappearance of her father and sister, 17-year-old Sonia only wants to pick up where she left off a year ago at her NYC prep school. When she learns that her father discovered an…"
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- At 1:17am on January 3, 2013,
StaffLaura Chesterson said… To Alexis
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- At 9:36pm on May 18, 2012, Jamie Burch said…
Thank you SO much for your feedback, Alexis! I really appreciate your help. :)
- At 1:43am on January 3, 2012,
StaffLaura Chesterson said… To Alexis
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- At 10:30am on September 12, 2011,
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