Thanks so much for sharing! First off, hats off for showing as opposed to telling throughout these five pages. Also you presented a thoroughly bleak scenario for your main character (MC) which matches your description.
I'm brand new to this site and to this group, but I thought I'd say I've just read and enjoyed your pages.
I thought the voice of your protagonist was great, the story flowed well, and it definitely kept my interest.
"Starry Starry Night by Abigail Johnson
During the summer in Arizona, the only thing more oppressive than the heat is the silence in sixteen-year-old Jill Whitaker’s house since her mother left. If she’d asked, Jill…"
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I've been enjoying the first five pages group here on YAlitchat and I've worked a bit with some people on AgentQueryConnect. Both lead me to believe that a little, solid group would work wonders.…"
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