I'm just copying and pasting and skpping the PDF since everyone else did. I've been asked by an agent (squeee!) to get this down to 1 1/2 to 2 pages and here's my shot at it. I feel like I'm leaving a lot out,even though this ain't exactly War and Peace. Thanks for all feedback! And sorry if the formatting is a little wonky.
On the first day of her junior year, sixteen-year-old GEORGIA BAR…