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Synopsis Repair Shop

Synopsis in serious need of repair? Wondering what goes here or there? Short synopsis repair is here. 1-2 pages, we don't care. Any longer though, you must look elsewhere. Group Coordinator is LM Prestion.

Members: 160
Latest Activity: Apr 29

Group Info and Instructions

BEFORE POSTING - READ HERE FIRST!

Please post your 1-2 page synopsis directly into the Discussions Forum below. To upload your synopsis, follow these steps:
1. Start a discussion
2. Name your discussion with the title and author
3. Fill in the required fields and select your file to upload
4. PLEASE UPLOAD ONLY .PDF FILES (this is for your own protection and that of the people who will review and critique your work)
5. PLAY NICE - Give constructive feedback without being rude or nasty please.

EX:
MESSIAH by Georgia McBride

YOUR SYNPOSIS MUST ALREADY BE NO MORE THAN 1-2 PAGES. WE WILL NOT ACCEPT WORK THAT IS MORE THAN TWO (2) PAGES FOR CRITIQUE.

This is the PDF file creator that I use. You simply print your Word doc to the PDF program and save as a PDF. There are plenty of others, including Cute PDF which I have also used for years.

Reviewers should leave their critiques in the appropriate discussion. Remember that #YAtitchat RULES ON PLAGIARISM apply to this group. Click here to view the rules. http://yalitchat.ning.com/page/rules-1

Comment Wall should be used for questions, concerns, group issues.

IMPORTANT: Because we have limited storage space on ning, your work can only remain posted for THREE (3) WEEKS. At the end of three weeks, I will ask you to delete your posting. If you do not, I will delete it for you. If we become space hogs, Ning will charge money for additional storage.

If you need anything, please Group Coordinator, LM Preston.
Thanks-
Georgia

QUICK SYNOPSIS TIPS:

Here is a quick blog link that I found on writing Synopsis from the Vivian Beck Agency:
http://www.vivianbeck.com/writing/5_steps_to_writing_a_synopsis.htm

Step 1: Start With A Hook. This should be a paragraph or two similar to the blurb on the back of a book. Mood and tone is important here, use special adjectives.

Step 2: Introduction of Characters. Introduce the main characters in your book. Tell their MOTIVATION, CONFLICT, and GOALS. Stay away from detailed physical descriptions unless this information is pertinent to your story.

Step 3: Construct the Body of Your Synopsis. Here, using paragraphs, write the high points of your story in chronological order. Keep these paragraphs tight, don't give every little detail. Remember, each scene should include, ACTION, REACTION, and a DECISION.

Example: Sam kisses Mary goodnight. (ACTION) He makes her forget she does not want to get involved in a relationship. (REACTION) He's dangerous to her hard-earned peace of mind. (DECISION)

Step 4: Use Three or Four Paragraphs to Write the CRISIS and RESOLUTION of Your Story. Keep this simple, but make sure you show your main characters' reactions. Don't keep the editor/agent guessing. Your synopsis must include the resolution to your story.

Step 5: Rewrite your synopsis until each sentence is polished to the point of perfection. Use strong adjectives and verbs, and always write in the present tense. Make every word count.
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YA Contemporary "A Little Bird Told Me"

Started by Loriel Jarvis. Last reply by Loriel Jarvis Apr 24. 7 Replies

Hi All,New to the group from Australia. I'm really struggling with a short synopsis and have rewritten it and cut it down so many times, I feel like I've lost the thread of it completely! I would…Continue

TIGER DAUGHTER by Ashley Walker

Started by Ashley Walker. Last reply by Sarah Negovetich Feb 19. 12 Replies

Hi all. I'm new to the group and seeking comments on the synopsis for my upper MG urban fantasy. Thanks in advance to anyone who has a moment to read and respond.  AshleyContinue

Rite of Rejection by Sarah Negovetich

Started by Sarah Negovetich. Last reply by Ashley Walker Feb 19. 9 Replies

Hey guys. This is my YA SciFi/Dystopian. I've been polishing my query, but the synopsis still needs work. I'd love to get your thoughts. Thanks in advance!~SarahContinue

One Will Die

Started by Lisa Kelleher. Last reply by Sarah Negovetich Feb 10. 4 Replies

Hello - please help me with this; the story is YA --Thanks in advance,LisaContinue

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