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"Overall you have all the major story points but the connection to the mc is distant…"

LM Preston replied Sep 17, 2012 to BATTLEGROUND-Contemporary YA

 6 Sep 24, 2012
Reply by Jennifer M. Hartsock

"Hi Gayle! Welcome to Synop Repair :-D The story sounds awesome. There are areas whe…"

LM Preston replied Sep 17, 2012 to The Freak Emporium - Gayle C. Krause

 7 Sep 18, 2012
Reply by Gayle C. Krause

"Here's my shot at it: Snark and Circumstance Synopsis Sixteen-year-old GEORGIA BARR…"

LM Preston replied Jul 9, 2012 to Snark and Circumstance

 6 Jul 13, 2012
Reply by Stephanie Wardrop

"Hey Sarah; I'll give it a go. It reads well overall, stronger. Some areas could use…"

LM Preston replied May 29, 2012 to The Watchers -1 pager

 11 Jun 7, 2012
Reply by Alisha Marie Klapheke

"Hello Alexis! I'm happy to help: Overall you want your synopsis to read a bit like a…"

LM Preston replied May 29, 2012 to Synopsis for THE GENETICIST’S DAUGHTER

 7 May 31, 2012
Reply by Alexis Wynn

"Here you go: Overall remember your hooks, and you have lots of really long sentences…"

LM Preston replied May 1, 2012 to Revised Synopsis Edge of the Falls

 2 May 1, 2012
Reply by LM Preston

"Hi! Here's my feedback: When honor student HALEY PATTERSON hears that her long tim…"

LM Preston replied Apr 28, 2012 to The Lies that Bind version #3 by Chris Canada

 7 Apr 28, 2012
Reply by LM Preston

"I'm going to add to the other feedback: Paragraph 1: A bit overly descriptive and…"

LM Preston replied Apr 28, 2012 to The Princess's Treasure Hunt Synopsis

 7 Apr 28, 2012
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"Hi Stephanie; I read this and broke it down by paragraph but lost all of my comment…"

LM Preston replied Apr 28, 2012 to Megaland - synopsis

 9 May 7, 2012
Reply by Sarah Negovetich

"Hey Heather, here's my comments. Overall to tighten up stay on the mc's POV. Also, s…"

LM Preston replied Feb 14, 2012 to Touched by Darkness by Heather L Reid

 5 Feb 16, 2012
Reply by Carolyn Chambers Clark

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