First major plot point

Started by Ashtyn Stann Jul 9, 2012. 0 Replies 0 Likes

Hi!  So I wrote the catalyst scene to my current work in progress, a YA fantasy romance.  I feel a little unsure about it and just wanted to get some opinions! So, a little bit of background before I…Continue

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Let's get this group going again! Please crit the 4th chapter from my YA Para Romance SWAY

Started by Alisha Marie Klapheke. Last reply by Alisha Marie Klapheke Mar 1, 2012. 8 Replies 0 Likes

Premise: Liliana, a 17 year old Nashville girl, falls in love with Miach, a boy whose spirit is tied to an ancient oak that sits on the neglected English estate her family recently inherited. She has…Continue

Opening Two Paragraphs

Started by Kym Balthazar Fetsko. Last reply by Sandra S. Rice Feb 14, 2012. 12 Replies 0 Likes

I'm not sure if this is the appropriate place to put these up or not, but figured, what the heck.  I can always take um down and post in another group if need be.Below are the opening two paragraphs…Continue

First 250 in The Splendorous Plum Murders

Started by Amber Skye Forbes. Last reply by G. Donald Cribbs Sep 1, 2011. 6 Replies 0 Likes

Here's the first 250 of a novel I have just begun revising. I usually like to get the first 250 just right because then I feel like that sets up how well I'm able to revise for the rest of the novel.…Continue