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"Here's my 2cents: Overall you could shorten the sentences to give the scene more pun…" LM Preston replied May 28, 2011 to First 250 in The Splendorous Plum Murders	6	Sep 1, 2011 Reply by G. Donald Cribbs
""I heard a small noise, not connected to where we were--a frail, tiny noise distinc…" LM Preston replied Mar 17, 2011 to One Line	7	Sep 1, 2011 Reply by G. Donald Cribbs
"Okay, so what do you want us to tell you about it? There's so many ways to say the s…" LM Preston replied Mar 17, 2011 to One Line	7	Sep 1, 2011 Reply by G. Donald Cribbs
"I'm all over B!!!" LM Preston replied Dec 8, 2010 to Opening Two Paragraphs	12	Feb 14, 2012 Reply by Sandra S. Rice
"This is much better. It's ordered, has depth to the character and the reader connect…" LM Preston replied Oct 25, 2010 to New 250	12	Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"This is much better. However, now you have an opportunity to add a powerful first se…" LM Preston replied Oct 24, 2010 to New 250	12	Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"Hey Mari, Next time you may want to put a synop of the story with your posting. That…" LM Preston replied Oct 24, 2010 to New 250	12	Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"Hi Amber, I love the imagery you are building here as well as the suspense of where…" LM Preston replied Oct 5, 2010 to Beginning of Witch Tourniquet	4	Oct 5, 2010 Reply by LM Preston
"Hi! Brynna I did giggle at that first line. The rest was interesting but didn't mak…" LM Preston replied Oct 5, 2010 to Starkissed first 250.	5	Oct 5, 2010 Reply by LM Preston
"Overall nothing jumped out at me. However, you may want to read your dialogue outlou…" LM Preston replied Oct 5, 2010 to New First 250	6	Oct 5, 2010 Reply by Sandra S. Rice

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LM Preston's Discussions (397)

"Here's my 2cents: Overall you could shorten the sentences to give the scene more pun…"

"﻿"I heard a small noise, not connected to where we were--a frail, tiny noise distinc…"

"Okay, so what do you want us to tell you about it? There's so many ways to say the s…"

"I'm all over B!!!"

"This is much better. It's ordered, has depth to the character and the reader connect…"

"This is much better. However, now you have an opportunity to add a powerful first se…"

"Hey Mari, Next time you may want to put a synop of the story with your posting. That…"

"Hi Amber, I love the imagery you are building here as well as the suspense of where…"

"Hi! Brynna I did giggle at that first line. The rest was interesting but didn't mak…"

"Overall nothing jumped out at me. However, you may want to read your dialogue outlou…"

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