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"Sorry, I'm a little behind. I like your sentence you just posted. Good luck! Mari " Mari J Carpenter replied Nov 9, 2010 to Please Vote --Which line?	8	Nov 14, 2010 Reply by C. Lee McKenzie
"Thanks so much to everyone here. Mari" Mari J Carpenter replied Oct 25, 2010 to New 250	12	Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"Thanks L.M. you helped me get there. Mari " Mari J Carpenter replied Oct 25, 2010 to New 250	12	Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"OK - using L.M.'s suggestion, I revised the beginning: Patience and strategy. This w…" Mari J Carpenter replied Oct 25, 2010 to New 250	12	Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"Thanks so much LM. I've got a couple of sentences in mind. Mari I'll post it soon. " Mari J Carpenter replied Oct 25, 2010 to New 250	12	Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"Thanks for all your critiques. They're awesome! I've rearranged words and taken in a…" Mari J Carpenter replied Oct 24, 2010 to New 250	12	Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"I've changed it up a bit - check it out: Ventry, Ireland. Present day. Saturday was…" Mari J Carpenter replied Oct 23, 2010 to New 250	12	Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"This is a scene - i hope to show more 'voice' to the MC." Mari J Carpenter replied Oct 23, 2010 to New 250	12	Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"It's different. You can try, is the only thing I can say - Mari" Mari J Carpenter replied Oct 22, 2010 to Adventures Of A Cynical Bystander	1	Oct 22, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter
"HeySandra - I didn't see anything glaring at me. The only thing that came to mind wa…" Mari J Carpenter replied Sep 29, 2010 to New First 250	6	Oct 5, 2010 Reply by Sandra S. Rice

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