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Pimp My Scene Discussions (20)
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 First major plot pointHi! So I wrote the catalyst scene to my current work in progress, a YA fantasy romance. I feel a little unsure about it and just wanted t… Started by Ashtyn Stann |
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  Let's get this group going again! Please crit the 4th chapter from my YA Para Romance SWAYPremise: Liliana, a 17 year old Nashville girl, falls in love with Miach, a boy whose spirit is tied to an ancient oak that sits on the ne… Started by Alisha Marie Klapheke |
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Mar 1, 2012 Reply by Alisha Marie Klapheke |
 Opening Two ParagraphsI'm not sure if this is the appropriate place to put these up or not, but figured, what the heck. I can always take um down and post in an… Started by Kym Balthazar Fetsko |
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Feb 14, 2012 Reply by Sandra S. Rice |
 First 250 in The Splendorous Plum MurdersHere's the first 250 of a novel I have just begun revising. I usually like to get the first 250 just right because then I feel like that se… Started by Amber Skye Forbes |
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Sep 1, 2011 Reply by G. Donald Cribbs |
 One LineI need help with one line from my ya paranormal romance. Before I post the line I should give you some context. The mc has the ability to l… Started by Beth Fred |
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Sep 1, 2011 Reply by G. Donald Cribbs |
 Scene in Immortal the MusicalHelp! I need to elevate the conflict in one sequence, but can't for the life of me figure out how. Back story: in the 1400's an apoth… Started by Crystal Collier |
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May 27, 2011 Reply by Crystal Collier |
 Title suggestionsHey. I too need some help with the title. My story is a coming-of-age novel with ingredients like a cynical protagonist, a dreadful high-sc… Started by Shreyonti Chakraborty |
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Nov 19, 2010 Reply by Alysia Mathews Broadfield |
 Please Vote --Which line?I'd like some input on two OPENING lines for my Urban Fantasy. Needs to be light-hearted, but give the reader a sense of the MC. Thanks!#1)… Started by Sandra S. Rice |
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Nov 14, 2010 Reply by C. Lee McKenzie |
 New 250Tell me your thoughts, please. Mari Started by Mari J Carpenter |
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Oct 25, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter |
Adventures Of A Cynical BystanderHey! Does this work. I know we're all used to stories with a beginning, a middle and an end but I am trying to do something different. This… Started by Shreyonti Chakraborty |
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Oct 22, 2010 Reply by Mari J Carpenter |
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