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 Staff Alumni and Success StoriesSince the alumni list is growing so furiously now, we decided to remove it from the home page and make it it's own discussion. Here's the… Started by Jessie HarrellLatest Reply |
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Staff Georgia's Self-Editing Tips1. First self-editing tip (and probably the most valuable). PLEASE get yourself a copy ot The Blue Book of Grammar and Punctuation AND The… Started by Jessie HarrellLatest Reply |
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  The Walking Sticks by Sharron RiddleHi Everyone! I have completed this YA horror and would greatly appreciate any feedback on the first pages. This is my query: Kerry Kingston… Started by Sharron Riddle Houdek |
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May 11 Reply by Sharron Riddle Houdek |
 TO SAVE MY LIFE - Lindsey FrydmanHere's my logline and first five pages for my sci-fi romance, TO SAVE MY LIFE. The Artificial Intelligence and Robotics Lab created Aiden,… Started by lindsey frydman |
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 "The Other Side of Happy"Seventeen-year-old Carleigh Anderson is saddled with poverty, a drug-addicted mother, and her mother's abusive boyfriend. Add her missing f… Started by Caryn DeVincenti |
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May 2 Reply by Abigail Johnson |
 Starry Starry Night by Abigail JohnsonThis is a contemporary YA with a strong coming of age/romance theme. It's about a sixteen year old girl experiencing heartbreak and love f… Started by Abigail Johnson |
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May 2 Reply by Abigail Johnson |
 HEIRLOOMHi everyone. I’ve picked up this WIP and reworked it. I hope I’ve made it unique enough and that it has a better theme this time. Although… Started by Sandra S. Rice |
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Apr 19 Reply by Sandra S. Rice |
 MIND RIFT YA ThrillerHi Everyone, Any comments or suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, Started by Elizabeth Arroyo |
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Apr 16 Reply by Elizabeth Arroyo |
 IMPERIUM YA sci-fiHere are the first five pages of my YA sci-fi entitled IMPERIUM. One line pitch (Not sure this pitch really gets the idea of the story acro… Started by Dina von Lowenkraft |
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Apr 15 Reply by Elizabeth Arroyo |
 TIGER DAUGHTER by Ashley WalkerI'd appreciate comments on the opening to TIGER DAUGHTER, a YA contemporary adventure told from the POV of a family of circus cats and thei… Started by Ashley Walker |
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Mar 24 Reply by Ashley Walker |
 Legendary by L.H. NicoleLegendary is the first book in a new YA fantasy saga breathing new life and twists into the classic Arthurian legends, creating a realm of… Started by Lisa Hood |
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Mar 22 Reply by Sandra S. Rice |
 Shattering Vengeance - YA Dark fantasy.Hi Everyone, I'm currently working on a YA dark Fantasy inspired by Phantom of the Opera with mystery at its core. I have previously upload… Started by Soumi Roy |
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