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"I'm with Carlie in the "realize." I also think "decide to attend" could be beefed up…"

Leah Hultenschmidt replied Jan 19, 2012 to Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber

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"Sounds like a lot of fun.  Some tightening could be done here, but overall the conce…"

Leah Hultenschmidt replied Jan 19, 2012 to Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber

 584 Jan 29, 2012
Reply by Sophia Chang

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"I actually think this is a great approach. It gets me all the info I need to know an…"

Leah Hultenschmidt replied Jan 19, 2012 to Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber

 584 Jan 29, 2012
Reply by Sophia Chang

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"Every sentence here sounds like it could come from a different book. This needs more…"

Leah Hultenschmidt replied Jan 18, 2012 to Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber

 584 Jan 29, 2012
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"I like the title and even though you throw around some terminology, it doesn't feel…"

Leah Hultenschmidt replied Jan 18, 2012 to Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber

 584 Jan 29, 2012
Reply by Sophia Chang

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"There are some great details here--three identical pairs of cowboy boots tells me a…"

Leah Hultenschmidt replied Jan 18, 2012 to Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber

 584 Jan 29, 2012
Reply by Sophia Chang

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"I'm not hearing a real hook here.  It seems as though the first couple of lines coul…"

Leah Hultenschmidt replied Jan 18, 2012 to Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber

 584 Jan 29, 2012
Reply by Sophia Chang

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"I had to read this a few times to be sure of the gist--we have a lot of names and an…"

Leah Hultenschmidt replied Jan 18, 2012 to Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber

 584 Jan 29, 2012
Reply by Sophia Chang

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"Why would the kidnapper believe the organ recipients have knowledge from their donor…"

Leah Hultenschmidt replied Jan 18, 2012 to Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber

 584 Jan 29, 2012
Reply by Sophia Chang

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"More about Abby--her personality and her situation--would be really helpful here to…"

Leah Hultenschmidt replied Jan 18, 2012 to Pitch-Slam Weekend January 13-15, 2012 with Rachel Dugas, Leah Hultenschmidt and Carlie Webber

 584 Jan 29, 2012
Reply by Sophia Chang

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