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Staff "The biggest thing that hits me when I read this pitch is the poor punctuation and gr…" Michelle Witte replied Jun 12, 2012 to Second Chance Pitch Slam Here!	783	Jul 7, 2012 Reply by Nichole Joy White
Staff "I'm rather confused by the line about hunting season is an excused absence. It doesn…" Michelle Witte replied Jun 12, 2012 to Second Chance Pitch Slam Here!	783	Jul 7, 2012 Reply by Nichole Joy White
Staff "This is a good concept, and I love that it's a fantasy based on a different culture.…" Michelle Witte replied Jun 12, 2012 to Second Chance Pitch Slam Here!	783	Jul 7, 2012 Reply by Nichole Joy White
Staff "You've got such an interesting combination of elements here that it makes it hard to…" Michelle Witte replied Jun 12, 2012 to Second Chance Pitch Slam Here!	783	Jul 7, 2012 Reply by Nichole Joy White
Staff "There isn't enough at stake here, and the threat of nuclear attack just isn't an iss…" Michelle Witte replied Jun 12, 2012 to Second Chance Pitch Slam Here!	783	Jul 7, 2012 Reply by Nichole Joy White
Staff "I'll admit that the moment my eye hit the apostrophe in Enes'— I stopped. I am a hug…" Michelle Witte replied Jun 12, 2012 to Second Chance Pitch Slam Here!	783	Jul 7, 2012 Reply by Nichole Joy White
Staff "This plot feels just a bit thin to me. There don't seem to be any real stakes that w…" Michelle Witte replied Jun 12, 2012 to Second Chance Pitch Slam Here!	783	Jul 7, 2012 Reply by Nichole Joy White
Staff "I think Doctor Who has broken me to most time travel stories. It would have to be ex…" Michelle Witte replied Jun 12, 2012 to Second Chance Pitch Slam Here!	783	Jul 7, 2012 Reply by Nichole Joy White
Staff "I'm not fond of retellings of books from a different character's POV. Or even contin…" Michelle Witte replied Jun 12, 2012 to Second Chance Pitch Slam Here!	783	Jul 7, 2012 Reply by Nichole Joy White
Staff "That first sentence is really convoluted. Also, it might just be me, but I always wa…" Michelle Witte replied Jun 12, 2012 to Second Chance Pitch Slam Here!	783	Jul 7, 2012 Reply by Nichole Joy White

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Michelle Witte's Discussions (152)

"The biggest thing that hits me when I read this pitch is the poor punctuation and gr…"

"I'm rather confused by the line about hunting season is an excused absence. It doesn…"

"This is a good concept, and I love that it's a fantasy based on a different culture.…"

"You've got such an interesting combination of elements here that it makes it hard to…"

"There isn't enough at stake here, and the threat of nuclear attack just isn't an iss…"

"I'll admit that the moment my eye hit the apostrophe in Enes'— I stopped. I am a hug…"

"This plot feels just a bit thin to me. There don't seem to be any real stakes that w…"

"I think Doctor Who has broken me to most time travel stories. It would have to be ex…"

"I'm not fond of retellings of books from a different character's POV. Or even contin…"

"That first sentence is really convoluted. Also, it might just be me, but I always wa…"

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